豆子说之第二轮
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Calibri">001 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">策疆</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">过瘾！一个气势恢弘的大场面，在作者笔下娓娓道来，不疾不徐，井井有条，功力比《将军令》强了很多。对</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "mso-hansi-font-family:"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">苻坚的心理变化刻画真实细致，贯穿文章，形成脉络，也是文章一大亮点。不过我虽然对军事一窍不通，也很好奇燕军怎么退后三步，丝毫不乱的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "mso-hansi-font-family:","serif"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "mso-hansi-font-family:","serif"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "mso-hansi-font-family:"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">文字也比上篇干净利索了许多，虽然看开篇第一句让我觉得你还是那样子……“斜阳夕照，暮色渐浓，漫天乌云涌动，空中闷雷滚滚。”东边日出西边雨？那乌云怎么漫天的？神奇的大自然啊！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "mso-hansi-font-family:","serif"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "mso-hansi-font-family:","serif"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "mso-hansi-font-family:"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "mso-hansi-font-family:","serif"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">8<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "mso-hansi-font-family:","serif"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "mso-hansi-font-family:","serif"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "mso-hansi-font-family:","serif"; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">002 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">碧螺春晓送君还</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">前半部分和后半部分说关联呢，似乎有一点，可我怎么看着那么不搭界啊？或者试试用穿插的手法叙述一下？开头是父亲要杀儿子，然后高丽部分出现，在高丽部分多用笔墨？不知道效果如何，总之要比两部分平均用力更适合一些吧？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">另，用第一人称写文，最好尽量避免过长和过于复杂的句式，否则影响文章流畅度。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">7<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">003 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">四季图</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">不客气地说，整篇文章故弄玄虚，矫揉造作。步留仙倒也罢了，毕竟规则需要他出场，虽然戏份有点多了，唐姓男子、风九跟整体情节有什么关系？又是写一半就扔出来了？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">文章小毛病也很多，情节设定上的和文字方面都有，少不得再当次小学老师，举一个例子说明。唐姓男子在法场上已经报出自己姓氏了，逍遥山庄家丁也够不敬业的，居然也没向庄主禀报一声，害你又费不少笔墨。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">6<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">004 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">浪淘沙</span><span style="COLOR: black; 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</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">谁主江山</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">“</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">孟昭容已经抽出了腰间的巧舌软剑，冰火九重天。”这个……那个……好女孩不这么写啊，乖……</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">整篇故事叫青鸾姑娘历险记更为合适，尽管你极力描写众生相，力求深刻，却还是时时让我看到了你的……嗯，单纯。虽然是武侠，虽然写江湖，但人物性格还是要求真实，不是说带了张人皮面具就不是人了。还是写点自己熟悉的东西比较好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">另，借地方对于喜欢研究评委喜好的人说两句。七杀写黄真真的几乎都被我嘲笑了，我一熟女，对于这种女性天敌加公敌的极品尤物又嫉又恨之下，还是很熟悉的，不是说最了解你的就是你的敌人吗？笑。这届写孟昭容的请小心。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">6.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">005 </font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">司马</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">我一看客栈，就想，又要为杀而杀了吧？果然，连打斗场面都没有出现，桓桢就挂了。原谅我吧，我连评论场面都没有出现，就给分了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 15.75pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">“</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">为司马皇室，而战！</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">”</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">下次为豆典娜而战吧，或许我能给你加</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">0.05</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">分。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">6<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">006 </font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">刺客</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: "mso-ascii-font-family:"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">也许这么写文可以让你“</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">到达了自己快乐的天堂”，看文的人，很有可能被你“送到了灵魂的地狱”。你是想刻画一个为正义刺杀坏人，不幸被凌辱但宁死不屈的女侠呢？还是想描写一个看起来楚楚可怜，反而能激发起男人蹂躏欲望的女人呢？你要写的，是一个可歌可泣的英雄故事呢？还是一个可淫可乐的情色小说呢？迷惘……</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">另，据说处女被强奸会死是因为出血过多，要不你加上相关描述？那样比较真实可信。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">6<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">007 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">独活</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">看了这篇文章，我想起以前玩的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">rpg</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">游戏来了。要救赵灵儿，李逍遥要去桃花林，在那里，他遇到了阿奴；因为阿奴要求李逍遥用什么东西换解药，李逍遥又出发去找解药……如果李逍遥选择</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">A</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">，那么结局是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">XXX</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">，如果李逍遥选择</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">B</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">，那么结局是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">XXX</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">，如果……</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">挺好一畅销书题材，干吗不能写得紧张刺激点呢？结尾也不要开放式嘛，给个喜闻乐见的俗套结局就好。没事看看谢尔顿或丹布朗吧。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">7.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">008 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">复仇</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">除了一些小细节的处理外，整篇文章非常完美，情节、人物、结构都很出色，可以说是我八杀看到的第一篇真正意义上的好文。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">文字也是我比较欣赏的白描风格，个人观点，这种文字反而最考量作者的写作功底的。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">9.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">009 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">魔</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">嗯，百度了一下，进一步了解了这个传说。我没别的感想，就问一句，“</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">神怪易去，心魔难解。”何解？在你的文章里，谁有心魔？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">6</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">010 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">乱</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">%@$#*&</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">……果然很乱……</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">看过《一千零一夜》吧？我对那个女人把什么国王、丞相、法官、木匠都关一柜子里，然后跟小情人私奔的故事印象也很深诶。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">另，田青黛怎么就那么确定她肚子是小坏龙了？她跟别人做爱采取什么安全措施了吗？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">5.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">011 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">似是故人来</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">果然，只要开头出现酒楼、客栈等集会场所，文章就会是几个人碰到一起随便杀杀，死个把人得了。你比较高竿，谈笑间就死人了。这么好的通杀文，干吗不留在最后卡点的关键时刻发啊？可惜可惜！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">6<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">012 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">家族</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">我若是桓秘，利用桓熙打击桓冲等人，多个人多份力量，反正桓熙这种志大才疏的最后也好收拾。谋略啊谋略，就是利用可以利用的一切力量，不要着急毁灭。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">所谓庙堂江湖，其实区别不大，当利益当先时，人便丑陋不堪了。想借故事表达自己思想的意图很好，但是，你事先想好了吗？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">6<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">013</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">魅毒</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">我先请教一问题，你是借用了红楼梦里薛宝钗那句“东风卷得均匀”吗？小谢除了“未若柳絮因风起”外，还有卷得均匀一句是吗？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">面对这么直白而怨妇的小谢，想起那句“不意天壤之中，乃有王郎”的叹息，实在无语。所以，此文不评了，同情你，拿到小谢的马甲，太吃亏了。当然，我更同情小谢。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">4<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">014 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">断弦</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">狠狠地被感动了——在看过数篇煽情的文章后，被作者缓缓道来的少年心事彻底击中。想来作者在写这篇文章时很痛苦吧？没有代入，写不出这么细腻的感觉来。就像我上轮评论其他文章时说过，想打动读者，必先打动自己，虽然这对作者本人来说可能是种精神折磨。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">大概是因为你解释的把文章缩短的缘故，绿衣的故事没有交代，使得前面大段关于绿衣的叙述最终没有依托，其实略改改，把绿衣当成慕容冲在被凌辱过程中梦想的美好生活代表就融合了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">8.8<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">015 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">哭城</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">如果有人为了激我</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">PK</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">，把我朋友全灭了，那我肯定会发威如大型雌性猫科动物的。所以啊，虽然我不懂谋略，但料想屠城威吓对手的招也不是什么好办法。要真实啊要真实。个人比较欣赏古龙的观点，他说小说就是写人性的，不管什么背景，什么时代，总要写出真实的人吧？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">另，高句丽军队人数也不少吧？哪找来那么多新鲜、健康的鲜血的？比血头还厉害！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">7<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">016 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">晴天</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">本来也是为杀而杀，但人家有背景，是系列，就比其他的故事丰满了。丫头是新加的人物，既然是你喜欢写的，应该很出彩才是。可不知道为什么，这个人物并不鲜活。一个整天被人斥责的结巴，心理多少有些不自信吧？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">6.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">017 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">血色黄昏还是暗战？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">不用评是吧？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">yeah~<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Calibri">018 </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">一定要杀</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Calibri"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">原谅我不是“女中诸葛”，没看明白</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">段梦汐为什么要杀郦戎。恼羞成怒？既然觉得这个人有利用价值，为什么只是一次拒绝就杀了呢？为什么不再想法游说呢？果然，拒绝女人有罪，死刑，没缓！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">段梦汐跟郦戎讲条件那段很好笑，的确“头发长见识短”，郦戎自身没有任何好处，凭什么答应段姑娘您？现在讲究双赢，知道不？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">6<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">019 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">往生</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">作弊可耻，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">0</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">分！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">020 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">勃亚之死</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">晕倒！是我上轮扣分少了吗？怎么还有用英文标点的？要不我这次不扣一分扣八分？笑。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">在你文章中，我知道，人是在被杀中死去的，还提前学习了李太白的诗，能告诉我</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">2008</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">年奥运会各项冠军都是谁吗？我估计到时候有体彩……</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">021 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">红雪</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 20.25pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">作弊可耻，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">0</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">分！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">022 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">流殇</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">首先，我感谢你，你给我快乐。哎呀，真的笑得不行了。开头是芙蓉姐姐风，接下来就是一段街头霸王榜，再后来还有可以上传奇的男人自动变为女人，最后为了杀手出场，来了段《书剑恩仇录》。我觉得你的文章性价比最高，谁有本事在一篇文章里同时加那么多娱乐元素啊？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">另，如果你还是第一轮写初见的那个<span style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">勃亚，那么请尝试清新活泼路线，感觉那样可能你会发挥自如一些。</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">6</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">（看在你让我笑的份上，让你及格吧）</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">023 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">江南</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">写这篇文章时，你是不是在听林俊杰的《江南》。“风到这里就成绵”，我承认我是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">JJ</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">的粉丝，但他的歌词大部分都是不通的。你的文风大概也受影响了，很多句子在我乍看不明白，仔细读过，再想想……就更不明白了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">文章结束得很奇怪，所以，就算你没写未完待续我也知道你没写完，唉，我虽然笨，可我不傻啊。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">024 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">萧无水的剑</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">萧英雄，你知道我很景仰你的，和那些送你绢帕的少女不同，我是从知道你有痔疮后就不可抑制地把你当作世上唯一的大英雄了。你和别人不一样，你“杀人后的尸体”和你“拉下的屎”可以自动踢踢土块掩埋自己，光这点，就让我对你五体投地。而且，你还会炼“金枪不倒”之类的药丸，比那些崇洋媚外用伟哥的强了不知多少倍！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">所以，请你下次写一个完整的故事，不要总用文章的结尾糟蹋文章的开头。对自己的东西都始乱终弃，不厚道，也让我没借口给你高分诶。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">6.5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">025 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">杀死逍遥</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">学古龙不是抄古龙，文章中大段大段的句子，都可以在古龙小说中找到孪生兄弟，这让我很失落，特别是我发现你没引用原文时的文字没那么灵动时。你说我能怎么办？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">文章含蓄不等于交待不清楚，我看了三遍也没看出逍遥剑客杀人为什么是为了谯家？麻烦你回帖说明一下，如果你写了我没看到，那么我给你加分。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin;">另，李白又出现了，这回连李后主也有，不说什么了，只是“</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">宗照月那道深不可测的目光”怎么回事？他独眼的？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">026</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">蛰变</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">陆中山够能装的，先说“</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">也只有你背后那个人做得出来罢”，好像自己什么都知道了一样，骗小姑娘坦白了，才露出本来面目“恍然”说“居然是田青黛，真看不出”。小女孩哪儿斗得过老奸巨猾啊。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">文章总体还不错，情节比较饱满，结构清晰，没有过多余赘，文字虽然还需斟酌，但也算流畅。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">另，我也爱吃笋干烧肉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">8<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Arial","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">027</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">骊歌</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">.</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">湮灭</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">同是慕容冲，这篇就没</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">014</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">中的感人深刻，倒是塔雅公主那段独白比较出彩，道尽小女人心事。看来不熟不做这句话还是没错啊。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">7<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">028</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">烟花不堪剪</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">很干净的文字，很无奈的一个故事。唯一不幸的是，群杀开始前，我狠狠研究了相关历史，所以，连我这种历史盲都能看出其中</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">bug</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">7.5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">029 </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">王夫人传</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">原谅我实在没时间百度了，我不知道你的文章最精彩部分是摘录的，还是自己写的，姑且算你自己写的吧。上届有用古文写的，也有走明清小说路线的，我都给了高分，因为有自己的特点，文字功力也好。可你这突然插入的“</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">有一趟货出得极亏”</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">之类的</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">大白话让我有种听一半交响乐突然</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">SHE</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">出现了的感觉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">无奈之余再解释，我是呼吁大家可以根据历史故事发挥写文章，但这只是我指出的一条比较省力的写文方法——故事框架都有了，不必再费力设计。有些事件，史书上只是几句话，但咱们可以设想当时大家都是什么反应，每个人都说了什么做了什么等等。实在不能明白的，想想《三国志》和《三国演义》。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">评分：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">7.8<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm
