[第三轮评论]牛评
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">第三轮评分</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">001</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">血色文字</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">从第一轮开始，阁下的文就维持了一贯的低品质，令人钦佩。某伟人说过：打</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">0</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">分不难，难的是每轮都打</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">0</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">分。从第一轮二十几丈高的榆树，到第二轮数丈高的雪峰，本轮则直接</span><span style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体;"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">塌</span><span style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体;"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">掉了，能把路越走越矬，这真不是一般人能做得到的。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">乱曰：甘饵含毒，难数尝兮。麟而可羁，近犬羊兮。鸾凤高翔，戾青云兮。不挂网罗，固足珍兮。斯错位极，离大戮兮。屈子慕清，葬鱼腹兮。伯姬曜名，焚厥身兮。孤竹二子，饿首山兮。断迹属娄，何足称兮。辟斯数子，智若渊兮。我异于此，执太玄兮。荡然肆志，不拘挛兮。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">送上当时的文学偶像的片段，与阁下共勉，并顺祝</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">0</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">分。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">002</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">月涌大江流</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">看到水战，惊喜，果然有人发掘出新的表述方式，在这战争背景中杀人，其实真是有很多办法的。有加分。不过作者明显对水战不熟悉，描写太过失实，把加分又扣回去了。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">5.5</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">分</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">003</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">归去来</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">白痴战争文。什么公元某某年，什么继承遗志，什么冠军军，什么红小鬼，什么字典，什么山体滑坡，真</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">TMD</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">烂。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">3</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">．</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">5</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">分</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">004</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">乱世中的挣扎</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">我讨厌分割线，在这种炎热的天气里，服务器都挂了还要被无良主持逼着评文，连工资都不发，我恨分割线。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">6</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">分</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">005</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">当年,也曾纵横江湖</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">恶心、呕吐、乏力...这绝对是有孕在身的表现啊!!<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">不显山不露水可怜兮兮我见犹怜的小鸟......这是对孕妇最真实而生动的描写<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">另,题目和故事脱节,人物形象和背景脱节<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">0.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">4.5</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">分<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">06野心.友情<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">友情?野心?我只看到一群无聊的"怨妇"以及满地恶心至极的红<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">0.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">3.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">007</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">伤故人,<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文字的韵节如同音乐,流畅优美.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">但是,你会听一出只唱楔子和尾的戏吗?这中间的故事,难道是要让观者自己来演不成.瞥开流畅的文笔不谈,失败.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：3</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">6.<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">008</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">赤裸的阴谋<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2.5</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">6.5</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">009茉莉<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">5.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">010<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">如果说003是白痴战争文,你这篇就是连战争文都算不上的白痴文.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">还率队出城，奇袭乞伏?结果就回了个死人?摆脱就算写不来战争也请您起码好好看看背景.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">可怜一代白马人杰白马骚雄白马巾帼,让你整成了阿爹阿哥阿亚互相肉麻</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">虐情的文<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">"55.爹 爹爹...我...我看不下去了.!我..我TM一点胃口都没了...<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">哥..哥...剩下的...就..就交给你了...你是我哥,你不能让我失望!!!"<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：0.5</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：0.5</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">0<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">011</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">剑尊<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">作者问:"您觉得我写的文咋样?"<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">评委答:"哎......此文不能评"</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">作者眨眨眼问:"为什么?"<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">评委摇摇头说:"你这文傻气太重,确实曾有几个评委评过，可是据说才一见到就全都疯了，后来还纷纷自杀而死，没有一个活下来....你说,我怎么敢评呢!"<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">4<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">012</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">旺才</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">6<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">013</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">山河<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">总算见到篇实质性的杀文...T T<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">虽然你的故事不够吸引力,虽然你的情节叙述上失之偏颇,我还是要感动的顶..<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：3</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">6.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">014</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">蒲公英<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">--我们生来是评委,注定要受苦--<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">6<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">015</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">止杀<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">他</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">要一个人在午时死，这个人绝对是空着肚子的消失的。-首先,我是对着这句话评分的.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">笑,精心布置了这场局,气氛也极尽渲染.结果大网都撒好了,却放几只小丑在其中跳舞,还跳的不知所谓漏洞百出完全不合逻辑<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">4.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">016</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">无奈</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人生不如意事时常八九,谁也料不到于身之后所发生的事.就好象你也不会猜到我会给如此低的分数<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">017</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">冷月无声<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">不是个好故事,只觉得作者应该写的出更好的故事<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">6<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">018</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">长生剑(上)<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">没机会看(下)了,分还是要评的<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2.5</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">6.5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">019黄泉断<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">以盾牌为饵?好有创意.也只有作者这样的惊世之才才能想的出来.至于会中计的,那更是人才..我喷.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">一篇武侠小说,既不具有现实意义也没有趣味性,更别提所必须的创意和流畅的文笔.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">请问,你写的是什么,算什么?<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">3<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">020当年明月在<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">......嘿,您比第19篇那位还有将才,李代桃僵之余还能声东击西.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">试问史上还有什么人使的出以替身代死诱敌大意,真人却改道挖人家老妈的坟这种妙计..高..实在是高..<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">1.5</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">3.5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">021鬼哭<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">有句话我喜欢"恁该死的当初！"除此之外,一般一般..<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">6<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">022静水流深<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">023心愿<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">妹妹骑着小白马在市集上跑啊跑,边跑边想些有的没的..再平凡的事,被意识那么一搅合,也能沉甸甸的让人闷骚了.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">这种事我们把它叫做--自虐.结果上帝就派哥哥来惩罚了,刀一挥,人头落地.妹妹临死前哥哥大叫:"你....你真TM无聊.!"<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：0</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">1<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">3<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">024离歌<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">题目到是挺熟悉,很配苍白的故事啊<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：1</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">5</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">025权宜之计<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">是个故事,却不是个好故事.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2.5</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">2</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">6.5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">026天下<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">我一直觉得,真正志在天下的人,是不会整日把这两个字挂在嘴边的.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">就好像真正入戏的人永远不会说, "此生如戏".<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">2</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">6<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">027十面埋伏<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">你听过这首曲子吗,如果听过,就知道自己这篇文章写的有多造作.拖沓.不知所谓.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">也许这不是篇文,只是作者酒后乱语,还乱的过分做作<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：0.5</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">2<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">4.5<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">28 一醉幽冥<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">这篇文章最好的部分就是题目了。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">喝酒喝大了，然后拔剑砍人，人还砍错了。于是任务完成了，杀贴写完了。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">王绝之同学的遗言一定是：谁，，敢，，比，，我，，惨，，<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">打分：1<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">29归路<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">淡.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文笔：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">故事：2</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人物:3</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">7<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">030白马篇<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">开篇就用词不当。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">关于矗立与伫立：<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">前者是高耸直立的意思，带有一定的感情色彩。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">后者是长时间站在那里的意思，体现的是一种静态。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">为了体现出您的英勇，明显是前者更合适。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">对了，这个解剖青蛙的故事，很适合小学生作文－－<<一件令我难忘的事情>><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">解剖青蛙能够说明勇气？那我17岁就解剖人尸岂不成了上帝？<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">打分：3.5<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">031西风<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体;"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">游侠刺客，是国家祸乱之根本</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体;">”</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">没记错的话，这是群杀背景的来历<<深原－－乱世英杰传>>的原话。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">作者的资料找得倒是满靠谱的。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">文字还算流畅，读起来还算舒服，起码比那些半文半白至不文不白的文字要好。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">虽然文字尚可，但明显武侠不是作者的强项。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">至于情节，明显是凑出来的－－玩了玩文字杀了个人，刚把人的胃口吊起来故事就结束了。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">这样直接导致我看不出文章的主旨。<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">还有，那句有愧无愧，一再重复，目的是占字数？<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"> <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">打分：4<p></p></span></p>
